Friday, November 20, 2009

Friday Flash 55



When he fell, he fell with a deafening thud that tilted the world on its polar opposite axis.

However, it wasn't only his wing that broke. His heart broke too as God cried.

Mistakes are hard lessons. They are even harder for the righteous, especially when they don't know when to throw in the towel.

7 comments:

Chef Kar said...

Very nice debut ~ do come back and play with us again next week.

Mine is up:

Friday Flash 55 ~ The Boy on The Metro

I'm The Chez said...

Thanks, Chef!

Brian Miller said...

welcome to 55...an astounding start! great 55! stirring of the emotion!

mine is up!

G-Man said...

Well....?
Did you have fun?
Did you find this creative?
Challenging?
I loved this!
Excellent 55...
Please join the Friday FunFest again next week.
You Rock from Bugger Hole to Possom Hollow!!!
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Mona said...

wow! although one learns from the mistakes, sometimes one has to pay a price too!

Great 55ve! welcome to the 55ve world!

I'm The Chez said...

Thanks everyone. I recently had my students do a twitter-esque, story writing competition in class. Tell a story in 140 characters. So I was up for a challenge myself. It was fun.

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55....no less, no more....it's a so hard. sorry,, I can't do it. but I like the way you do it